Second Draft

                  

                  Steven George Gerrard (Topic) 

                  Steven George Gerrard is my favorite athlete. He as a youth football club from the age of 9 years old.(Topic sentence) He look like a player with the ability to save the game. And the addition of the game It takes far more precise.(Supporting sentence) He has devoted every minute of every game for every match and team to play for the club for the fans. (Supporting sentence) I like his Becouse a professional to honor colleagues Morality and the ethics of football experience and good behavior Both on the field and off the field Both as captain and head of the family. (Supporting sentence) He has been his sport success a player only one goal in the finals of the Football Bowl four large list League Cup against Manchester United. (Concluding sentence)